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Some people think that art is an essential subject at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #art #school #waste #time
The above line graph illustrates the percentage of different
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 people visited
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the cinema in the US between 2000 and 2011.
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 adults 35 years and over showed less interest
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 movies. Looking at the
age
 group between 15 and 24, 15% of them visited the cinema in 2000, and
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 the figure fluctuated for the next 3 years and again increased to reach more than 50%. in 200 2011. The Children aged between 7 and 14 were 10% in 2000
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and steadily rose to 30% in 2001 with some fluctuation. People with
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 25-35
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similar pattern compared to children. "
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 adults aged 35 or more always stay at the bottom of the graph,
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 almost nil and progressively increased to just above 10% in 2011.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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