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Your next-door neighbors like to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter -describe the situation -explain the problems it is causing you -offer at least one solution

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 to bring your attention to the nuisance created by my neighbours. My neighbours like to listen to music late hours at a high volume and because of
this
 I often lose my sleep at night. I already tried to convey
this
 to them but nothing has changed. I am a software engineer and working on some complex problems which need full attention.
Due to
 lack of ,sleep I am unable to focus properly which leads to less productivity.
Additionally
, I
also
 suffer from headaches sometimes because of
this
 which may result in serious health issues.
Therefore
, I request to ask neighbours to play music at a low level, especially late at night.
In addition
 to that, the building management can create rules to restrict the sound level one can play at night. I hope we can resolve
this
 promptly. Yours faithfully, Kishan
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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