The chart below shows local expenditure in 2010 and 2015.

The charts show the percentage breakdown of government spending across nine categories in 2010 and 2015.

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the charts indicate that nearly

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of the

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used for

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system. The least amount of spending

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was others. 24% was spent on education in 2010 and 20% in 2015 forming a slight difference of 4% over the

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of 5 years, The largest areas of government expenditure in both years was healthcare with 21% in 2010 and 20% in 2015. The smallest government expenditure was others and culture

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the number of others in both years has remained the same, 1% . culture and leisure number had been 2% in 2010 and

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had dropped to 1 in 2015.

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Mar 4, 2023

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