The table shows results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living on a particular city.Units are measured in percentage

The table shows results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living on a particular city.Units are measured in percentage
The table illustrates the conclusions of 2 surveys which were done in 1980 and 2010 in different parts of the citizens' lives.
Overall
,it can be seen that differences in some aspects are significant.
For example
,
while
the "Good"part had no splash or surge, the "Neither good nor bad" aspect changed sharply.Some of them rose,like "Transport",from 16 to 23 per cent.
However
,the most notable change had the "Employment" aspects,which fall dramatically from 22 to 5.
Firstly
,the best results in the "Good"
section
in 1980 were in the "Health","Education" and "Environment".
However
,30 years later the "Employment"
section
changed to the "Environment".
Secondly
,in the
section
which is called "Neither good nor bad",it can be observed that numbers in comparison with previous sections dropped significantly.The biggest score here was shops',which was 24,twice lower than in the leader of the "Good"
section
.
Moreover
,in 2010 nothing changed marketably.The leaders still were shops with 24 per cent.
Thirdly
,the
last
one is the "Bad"
section
.Here it can be seen that numbers completely differ from the same
section
in 2010 because all of them grew.
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