The money spent by governments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is
clearly
that, education and medical Replace the word
clear
center
Change the spelling
centre
much
more important than cosmos programmes. I fully disagree Add a missing verb
are much
this
statement because cosmos programmes Change preposition
with this
has
beneficial areas Change the verb form
have
such
as agriculture, forecasting, artificial intelengence
and investigation Correct your spelling
intelligence
in
aliens.
Change preposition
into
Firstly
, study
Replace the word
studying
cosmos
Correct article usage
the cosmos
teachs
us how to prevent Correct your spelling
teaches
teach
nature
disasters like meteoroids, earthquakes, Replace the word
natural
Correct word choice
and tsunamies
tsunamies
. Correct your spelling
tsunamis
tsunami
Secondly
forecasting gives advantages to farmers in order to protect plant lands from coming danger. Add a comma
,Secondly
For instance
, last
year there was published in "The Times newspaper " that this
summer drought will come, for
that reason farmers used Correct word choice
and for
of
technological tools. Another example is Change preposition
apply
space
technology learning helps farmers to protect their areas from heavy rains and upcoming storms.
On the other hand
, nowadays artificial intelligence is developing better than in past. Learning AI and applying it to space
learning will make people
life easy. Change noun form
people's
For example
, Nasa last
year did research about upcoming meteoroid path
and artificial intelligence draw a line from Fix the agreement mistake
paths
space
to earth where final
landing will be. That made Correct article usage
the final
space
employees
job much simple. Another advantage is searching Change noun form
employees'
employee's
different
life on different planets. There are a lot of saying that people who saw ufos’ Change preposition
for different
on
Change preposition
in
sky
and on one news in America area called 51 Add an article
the sky
ufo
landed. Change to a plural noun
UFOs
Moreover
, in
Change preposition
on
Correct article usage
the internet
internet
lots of information were about it.
Add a comma
,internet
To conclude
, I strongly agree that learning Change preposition
about place
place
Fix the agreement mistake
places
that
you do not live and predicting danger from Correct word choice
where
space
nowadays are more important for earth people. Government must spend their most salary on space
learning because I believe that humans can also
live in
different planets and thereChange preposition
on
a
lot of things that Add a missing verb
are a
needs
researchChange the verb form
need
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