The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
This
line graph represents the number
of people
who stayed on a certain Caribbean island
during their visit between the seven years during
2010-2017. Change preposition
apply
Also
, the chart shows the details of residency such
as who stayed on the island
or stayed on the cruise
ship.
The number
of tourists
who stayed on the cruise
ships
during their visits in 2010, started from a quarter million
, while
on the other hand
, about 0.75 million
people
preferred to stay on the island
itself. The next year, in 2011, the number
of tourists
who stayed on cruise
ships
doubled and reached half a million
. While
at the same time, there were no changes in the number
of visitors who stayed on the island
, remaining at three-quarters of a million
. It is clearly visible that from 2011 to 2013 the number
of people
stayed
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staying
cruise
ships
started to double, reaching 1.5 million
, and leveled
off during the next two years, Change the spelling
levelled
in contrast
, the number
of tourists
who stayed on the island
declined to 250 thousand people
and after 2012 started to surge reaching an all-time high of 2 million
people
at the end
of the span,2017. the total number
of people
who visited that particular island
started from 1 million
and increased dramatically reaching an all-time high of 3.5 million
in 2017.
To conclude
, staying on cruise
ships
was tourists
’ main preference till mid-2015, and after that staying on the island
became more attractive to tourists
. Overall
, people
like to visit and stay on that Caribbean island
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