The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
This
line graph represents the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
who stayed on a certain Caribbean Use synonyms
island
during their visit between the seven years Use synonyms
during
2010-2017. Change preposition
apply
Also
, the chart shows the details of residency Linking Words
such
as who stayed on the Linking Words
island
or stayed on the Use synonyms
cruise
ship.
The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
who stayed on the Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
during their visits in 2010, started from a quarter Use synonyms
million
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
on the other hand
, about 0.75 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
people
preferred to stay on the Use synonyms
island
itself. The next year, in 2011, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
who stayed on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
doubled and reached half a Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
While
at the same time, there were no changes in the Linking Words
number
of visitors who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
, remaining at three-quarters of a Use synonyms
million
. It is clearly visible that from 2011 to 2013 the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
stayed
on Wrong verb form
staying
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
started to double, reaching 1.5 Use synonyms
million
, and Use synonyms
leveled
off during the next two years, Change the spelling
levelled
in contrast
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
declined to 250 thousand Use synonyms
people
and after 2012 started to surge reaching an all-time high of 2 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
at the end
of the span,2017. the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
who visited that particular Use synonyms
island
started from 1 Use synonyms
million
and increased dramatically reaching an all-time high of 3.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2017.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, staying on Linking Words
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
was Use synonyms
tourists
’ main preference till mid-2015, and after that staying on the Use synonyms
island
became more attractive to Use synonyms
tourists
. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
people
like to visit and stay on that Caribbean Use synonyms
island
.Use synonyms
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