The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
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This
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line graph represents the
number
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of
people
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who stayed on a certain Caribbean
island
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during their visit between the seven years
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2010-2017.
Also
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, the chart shows the details of residency
such
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as who stayed on the
island
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or stayed on the
cruise
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ship. The
number
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of
tourists
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who stayed on the
cruise
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ships
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during their visits in 2010, started from a quarter
million
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,
while
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on the other hand
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, about 0.75
million
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people
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preferred to stay on the
island
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itself. The next year, in 2011, the
number
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of
tourists
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who stayed on
cruise
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ships
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doubled and reached half a
million
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.
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at the same time, there were no changes in the
number
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of visitors who stayed on the
island
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, remaining at three-quarters of a
million
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. It is clearly visible that from 2011 to 2013 the
number
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of
people
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stayed
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on
cruise
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ships
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started to double, reaching 1.5
million
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, and
leveled
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off during the next two years,
in contrast
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, the
number
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of
tourists
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who stayed on the
island
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declined to 250 thousand
people
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and after 2012 started to surge reaching an all-time high of 2
million
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people
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at the end
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of the span,2017. the total
number
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of
people
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who visited that particular
island
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started from 1
million
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and increased dramatically reaching an all-time high of 3.5
million
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in 2017.
To conclude
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, staying on
cruise
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ships
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was
tourists
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’ main preference till mid-2015, and after that staying on the
island
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became more attractive to
tourists
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.
Overall
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,
people
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like to visit and stay on that Caribbean
island
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, island, cruise, tourists, ships, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 10 times.
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