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Writing Samples
Band 7

A foreign friend of yours plans to visit your place and stay with you, but you do not have time on that date. Give your friend another alternate date to come. In your letter, you should: apologise for it explain how you will be busy on that date suggest to him an alternate time to come to your country

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Dear Riddhi, I hope
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 letter finds you well. It is very good to know that you are planning to
come
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 India and stay with me next month, but unfortunately, I am unavailable for the whole next month and I am extremely sorry for that. Please accept my apology. My company has organised an event in London for which I am the presenter. The event was planned
last
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 month and reservations are
also
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 done.
This
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 event will help me to boost my career and I have agreed to attend the same. I would suggest you come to India next summer vacation as we both will be having a holiday and can enjoy ourselves the most. We will go for a tour in
south
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South
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 India if there is enough time. Please let me know your availability at the earliest so I can arrange the rest of the things. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours lovingly, Kishan
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task response
Ensure that all aspects of the task are covered in the response. Provide a clearer explanation for why the suggested alternative date would be preferable.
coherence and cohesion
The logical progression of ideas is mostly clear throughout the response. However, consider using clearer transitions between different sections of the letter for better coherence.
lexical resource
A good range of vocabulary is used to express ideas. However, aim to use more varied and precise vocabulary to enhance the overall quality of the response.
grammatical range
There is a good control of a variety of structures, but some sentences are structurally awkward or unclear. Pay attention to sentence structure and accuracy to improve overall grammatical range.
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