The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that were opened in one country between 2011 and 2018
The line graph compares the figure for store closings and openings in a single country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, both new stores
and closed stores
have a downward trend. In
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Which
which
, the number of Correct pronoun usage
apply
stores
that closed was higher than the stores
that opened at the beginning, but by the end, there were still many stores
that were no longer operating.
In 2011, there were about 8,500 stores
opened, much higher than 6,300
Correct article usage
the 6,300
stores
closed
. By 2012, openings fell to as low as 4,000 but Correct pronoun usage
that closed
then
recovered to 6,000 in 2014. The number of stores
closing decreased slightly in 2012, and in 2013 reached a peak of 7,100.
The number of closes dropped deeply to just 600 in 2015 before going back to 5,100, which remained the same until 2018. Openings declined less substantially to around 4,000 between 2015 and 2017 and dipped to end at 3,000 precisely in 2018.Submitted by hoailinhvu0504 on
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