Some people suggest that sport champions should be banned from television, meanwhile the others say it is allowed. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is argued that international

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champions ought to be prohibited on TV since it consists of violence. I totally agree with

this

statement because it can increase criminal cases and spend a lot of

money

which

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of them will be elaborated

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the following paragraphs. 

To begin

with, TV programs provide sports related to violence to reduce stress

although

it will improve criminal problems. The programs encourage the viewers to commit 

similarly

as they do since basically humans will commit something that they always watch.

For instance

, children like to watch boxing,

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can influence them to apply at school and their friends will be a victim.

Moreover

, Victims and perpetrators

also

have an impact on their mental health. The criminal will feel guilty and the victims will be afraid to do activities. 

On the other hand

, the docudrama has many fans and regularly is a top program.

Consequently

, it will generate a lot of

money

. 

However

, the officials spend more

money

rather than collect it because they have to complete facilities to hold the event and

also

provide a budget for accidental cases.

For instance

, to create a karate competition, the committee should prepare several facilities

such

as arenas, shields and referees

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which it has to be allocated

money

for unexpected incidents like broken and

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.      In conclusion, it is true that international sports events involving violence have to be banned in TV programs and I strongly believe that

this

issue will enhance criminal cases and waste a lot of

money

. As far as I am concerned,

this

case will be a big problem in the future if it is not immediately forbidden.