Your have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter •say which points in the article you agree with •explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers. • offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to express my concern regarding an article in a national newspaper that was published
last
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month. I do not completely agree with the fact that all the town centres in my country are similar to one another. First of all , I agree that the paint colour of the railway stations is white in all the cities since
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is one of the most remarkable notations of my country.
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, it is true that all the railway stations are connected to the bus terminals in my nation.
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, there are some misleading information was given in the article.
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my city, Yangon is
capital
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the capital
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of Myanmar and the Yangon railway station is the biggest train station which has four platforms in total
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the stations in other towns have only two.
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, the train terminal in my hometown is operating 24 hours daily which is different from other places.
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, I would like to offer you a visit to my town if you are interested to choose my country as a vacation destination. I will be a personal tour guide and bring you around my city. I am looking forward to getting your input on
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issue. Yours faithfully, Hninn Ei Ei Win
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