Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing ttaffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, the

problems

of increasing vehicles and

pollution

are aggravated. I agreed that increasing the

price

of petrol is one of the methods to solve the above

problems

, but it is not the best way, indeed,there is a myriad of methods to tackle the

problems

. Increasing the

price

of

fuels

is definitely one of the ways that may help with the above

problems

. By increasing the

price

of

fuels

, some

people

may find it more difficult in affording them, and

hence

, they would drive less and consider using more public transport in daily life. As fewer

people

drive private cars, fewer fossil

fuels

will be burnt, and

as a result

, fewer

air

pollutants will be produced.

However

, as a huge number of private drivers come from the middle or even high socio-economic class, not many of them will concern about the

price

of petroleum,

therefore

, not many drivers will reduce their frequency of driving even though the

price

of fuel is increased.

Besides

increasing the

price

of fossil

fuels

, I think the most significant and effective solution to solve the

problems

in long term is that the

government

should review and

further

develop the public transportation system in a place. Currently, many

people

choose to drive as they find that it is very

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for them to travel around the community by using public transport. If the

government

can analyze current traffic

problems

and

further

improve the transportation system by

such

as developing new bus routes which allow

people

to access remote areas or adding more stops between the current tram and bus stations,

people

will be more willing to take public transport.

As a result

, the number of cars in town will be reduced and the

air

pollution

problem will be less severe.

Moreover

, the

government

need to raise public awareness about

air

pollution

by launching campaigns and television advertisements.

Air

pollutants do not only come from burning

fuels

in driving , indeed, they

also

come from many other human daily activities like using daily electronic gadgets. Every individual not only the drivers should be responsible for the

problems

.

Government

can work with electronic gadgets factories and label the devices that are environmentally friendly. With the labels,

people

are able to identify environmentally friendly applicants and switch from using traditional energy-consumption electronic gadgets to them. In conclusion,

although

I agree that increasing the

price

of petrol is able to solve the problem of growing traffic and

pollution

, it is not the best method. I believe that increasing public awareness and developing

a

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better public transportation will be a better way to improve the

problems

in long term.