Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing ttaffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, the

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of increasing vehicles and

pollution

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are aggravated. I agreed that increasing the

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of petrol is one of the methods to solve the above

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, but it is not the best way, indeed,there is a myriad of methods to tackle the

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. Increasing the

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of

fuels

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is definitely one of the ways that may help with the above

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. By increasing the

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of

fuels

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, some

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may find it more difficult in affording them, and

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, they would drive less and consider using more public transport in daily life. As fewer

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drive private cars, fewer fossil

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will be burnt, and

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, fewer

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pollutants will be produced.

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, as a huge number of private drivers come from the middle or even high socio-economic class, not many of them will concern about the

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of petroleum,

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, not many drivers will reduce their frequency of driving even though the

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of fuel is increased.

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increasing the

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of fossil

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, I think the most significant and effective solution to solve the

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in long term is that the

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should review and

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develop the public transportation system in a place. Currently, many

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choose to drive as they find that it is very

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for them to travel around the community by using public transport. If the

government

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can analyze current traffic

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and

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improve the transportation system by

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as developing new bus routes which allow

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to access remote areas or adding more stops between the current tram and bus stations,

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will be more willing to take public transport.

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, the number of cars in town will be reduced and the

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pollution

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problem will be less severe.

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, the

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need to raise public awareness about

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pollution

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by launching campaigns and television advertisements.

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pollutants do not only come from burning

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in driving , indeed, they

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come from many other human daily activities like using daily electronic gadgets. Every individual not only the drivers should be responsible for the

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.

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can work with electronic gadgets factories and label the devices that are environmentally friendly. With the labels,

people

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are able to identify environmentally friendly applicants and switch from using traditional energy-consumption electronic gadgets to them. In conclusion,

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I agree that increasing the

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of petrol is able to solve the problem of growing traffic and

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, it is not the best method. I believe that increasing public awareness and developing

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better public transportation will be a better way to improve the

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in long term.