The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph demonstrates the population of overseas visitors to ( The coast, the
mountains
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and the
lakes
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) in a European country in the period count by 20 years. Units are measured in (Thousands)
Overall
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, will the fluctuations have an effect on the cost and the
mountains
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they ended the period in increase comparison by thamslev first.
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the
lakes
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had a dramatic decline after reaching the high point. It is clear, the coast began in 1989 by 40000 and fell just once in 1992 were the visitors become approximately 35 thousand. Following that, the number keeps the increase until the end by over 70000.
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, the
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and
lakes
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grew together in first the period from 20 and 10 thousand respectively. Next , in 2002 they had a separate way from each other.
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, the
mountains
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hit a low point of about 35000.
While
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the
lakes
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in the same year start from more or less 75 thousand decreases to 50000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words mountains, lakes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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