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Some people complain about the use and abuse of the internet. Give your opinion

#people #abuse #internet
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Did you know that around 65% of the
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 population is an
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 consumer? Some
people
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 dislike
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 use because they don’t think it is educational or useful, especially for the youth.
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, the
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 is a good tool when used properly. Personally, I believe that the
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 plays a critical role in getting to know new information, skills and more.
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, when you don’t understand a topic explained in class, you can simply search it on google and it will show you a variety of explanations so you will for sure understand the topic. Years ago
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 was impossible to imagine and knowledge was something that a reduced amount of
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 had.
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, I think
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 are now more connected than ever.
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 is because of the chatting option, you can chat with individuals around the world, without having the problem of understanding each other, which is
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 translation tools. Before,
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 had to write cards that took days or even months to arrive at their destination.
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, there is fake news, and behaviours like cyberbullying appeared with
this
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 tool. In my opinion, we should control the bad use of the
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 as it can cause dangerous situations and psychological problems like depression or even suicide.
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, it’s a problem that can be solved.
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, the issue is not the
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 itself but the use the users give it. In conclusion, like everything,there are some good and bad aspects but I believe that the
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 is a practical, helpful and beneficial tool. And the problems that it has can be solved.
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