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University only requires to apply digital media rather than continuously upgrading textbook. Agree or disagree.

#university #media #textbook
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In
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 contemporary era,
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 is always a debatable topic that nowadays technology takes a high average position in
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 world.In
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 ,essay some people believe that learning institutions only require to apply
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 rather than continuously using or upgrading textbooks.I fully agree with
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 mentioned phenomenon.
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,both views will be discussed in the upcoming paragraph. To commence with
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 statement there is adequate evidence for
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 view which are substantially the first and foremost reason is using digital
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 helps the learner to carry less weightage of bags which means they can easily bring their
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 to university.,
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 students can easily store their data in their digital media so they do not need to write down any questions or answers on paper.
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,
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 could
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 help to save our environment through the deforestation of wood. On the other ,hand upgrading the textbooks are not taken place in
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 modern epoch ,
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,after filling out the textbooks or if the students got admission to a higher standard
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 the
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 are useless and some throw the
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.Adding more to it if the university should compulsory use of
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 it better development for society and for pupils as well.
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,In the research of Harvard University Canada ,Germany,America and a lot of developed countries have to use digital
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 in their institutes for better education and make it an easy way to study. To sum ,up if the universities have used to give
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 it is signed for better development of the nation so they less use paper and save the environment from deforestation.
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