A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible disadvantages – Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

I am glad to hear from you again. I am very happy that you ask me for some
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. I recommend you make
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tip, I think you are an adventurous man and you will enjoy
this
trip
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because staying in
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nature
help
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you to achieve new experiences and release your mind
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you can become familiar with new friends . But to be honest, I have to tell you about some disadvantages that you should be aware of.
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there are no facilities for camping
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your sleeping place is not usually suitable
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cam food is not healthy .
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, I recommend you
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take cans and take some equipment with you. I would like to come with you on
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trip but
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this
summer I have an exam and I stay at home and studying
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exam. Hope you enjoy your camping trip on that island.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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