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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the share of forest and
timber
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 in five different continents, namely South
America
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,
Africa
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,
Asia
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, Europe, and North
America
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.
Overall
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, forest in
Africa
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 accounts for the highest proportion among others,
whereas
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Asia
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 has the lowest.
Moreover
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, the most prominent
timber
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 is in North
America
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 but
Africa
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 has the least amount of
timber
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.
According to
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 the first paragraph,
Africa
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 and North
America
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 dominantly possess
forests
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while
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 the proportion of
forests
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 in
Africa
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 and
Asia
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 is minor.
In other words
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, the largest
forests
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 belong to
Africa
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 with 27%, followed by North
America
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 which owns 25% of the global
forests
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.
In addition
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, Europe comes third with 18%
whereas
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 30% originated in
Africa
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 and
Asia
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 with 16% and 14% respectively. It is interesting that the proportion of timers does not necessarily follow the same pattern as the first chart. Indeed, half of the timers in the world are produced in North
America
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 and Europe with 30% and 20% respectively.
Africa
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 is the second largest region to produce
timber
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.
Asia
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 has twice as many timbers as
Africa
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 which produces the least amount with 9%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words timber, america, africa, asia, forests with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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