It is better for children if the whole families (e.g. aunts, uncles and grandparents) are involved in the children's upbringing, rather than their fathers and mothers only. Give your opinion?

It is a highly debatable issue whether
children
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should be raised in joint families in which aunts, uncles and grandparents contribute to bringing up
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or by
parents
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alone as in nuclear families.
Although
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a joint family has many advantages, I firmly believe that a nuclear family is better for raising
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.
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with, in a nuclear family,
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can bring up
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with their own set of values and principles, without any interference.
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is something that can be easily established in a nuclear family, wherein the
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has to follow only one set of rules, and is not confused with varying opinions.
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, if a person’s values are not that traditional, and he wants his
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to be more broad-minded, he may not be able to do so in a joint family.
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, there is more space for individuality and self-expression in a nuclear family setup. Nuclear families make the
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more self-reliant and decisive,
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,
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of depending on a large number of family members to make decisions and take action.
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independent streak can come in handy, as the
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grows into an adult and has to make many decisions himself.
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, communication channels between the
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and parent can
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be more open and transparent, in a nuclear family, as
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have their attention focused on the
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, without having to divide their time with too many household responsibilities.
To conclude
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, in a nuclear
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children
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are reared by the
parents
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alone.
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, they can instil whatever values they want in their
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. They are
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more independent and have better relations with their
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.
Therefore
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it is better to raise a
child
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in a nuclear family.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • better
  • children
  • families
  • involved
  • upbringing
  • agree
  • disagree
  • important
  • role
  • primary
  • caregivers
  • support
  • guidance
  • development
  • parents
  • consistent
  • parenting
  • style
  • secure
  • boundaries
  • decisions
  • needs
  • feelings
  • voices
  • confuse
  • advice
  • follow
  • mixed
  • messages
  • behavior
  • discipline
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