More and more people relying on private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problem overreliances on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution

Many

people

prefer private vehicles over public transport as their mode of travel.

This

causes some serious issues,

such

as obesity, etc,

however

, it should be controlled by promoting the use of shared transport.

This

essay will discuss the disadvantages and solutions to combat the situation. To commence with, dependence on a private source of transportation may cost

people

health and money. First of all, it reduces walking and,

therefore

, increases body weight which causes heart problems, obesity, high level of cholesterol, etc. On other hand, using a personal vehicle may consume more petrol than shared transport,

thus

, costing higher.

For example

,

last

year, my paternal uncle got a heart attack and his cholesterol level crossed the borderline, after his recovery, his doctor suggested

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come out of his comfort zone; walk, especially, to a bus station and travel by public bus. These problems can be outweighed by proper action taken by the state government. Public transportation should be improved, so that, locals can easily use it. As many

people

at a single time are sharing petrol and walking to a station to catch a bus,

hence

, shared buses would not only save them money but,

also

, improve their health.

For instance

, research was made on the

people

of America, which concludes that the major reason why Americans live a healthy and long life mainly depends on their use of local trains and buses.

To conclude

, a complete dependency on personal cars would not only make a man physically inactive but,

also

, consume more fuel. Proper action should be taken by the state rulers to help their citizens to come out of

this

. In

this

regard, cosy and hassle-free buses may help.