More and more people relying on private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problem overreliances on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution
Many
people
prefer private vehicles over public transport as their mode of travel. Use synonyms
This
causes some serious issues, Linking Words
such
as obesity, etc, Linking Words
however
, it should be controlled by promoting the use of shared transport. Linking Words
This
essay will discuss the disadvantages and solutions to combat the situation.
To commence with, dependence on a private source of transportation may cost Linking Words
people
health and money. First of all, it reduces walking and, Use synonyms
therefore
, increases body weight which causes heart problems, obesity, high level of cholesterol, etc. On other hand, using a personal vehicle may consume more petrol than shared transport, Linking Words
thus
, costing higher. Linking Words
For example
, Linking Words
last
year, my paternal uncle got a heart attack and his cholesterol level crossed the borderline, after his recovery, his doctor suggested Linking Words
him
come out of his comfort zone; walk, especially, to a bus station and travel by public bus.
These problems can be outweighed by proper action taken by the state government. Public transportation should be improved, so that, locals can easily use it. As many Correct pronoun usage
he
people
at a single time are sharing petrol and walking to a station to catch a bus, Use synonyms
hence
, shared buses would not only save them money but, Linking Words
also
, improve their health. Linking Words
For instance
, research was made on the Linking Words
people
of America, which concludes that the major reason why Americans live a healthy and long life mainly depends on their use of local trains and buses.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, a complete dependency on personal cars would not only make a man physically inactive but, Linking Words
also
, consume more fuel. Proper action should be taken by the state rulers to help their citizens to come out of Linking Words
this
. In Linking Words
this
regard, cosy and hassle-free buses may help.Linking Words
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