Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: • explain the reason for the noise • apologies for the noise • describe what action you will take

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Dear Mr Victor I hope you're doing well. First thing, I would like to apologise for

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inconvenience. Second thing, I would like to let you know about the noise from my apartments. I moved to a new house in 2022. Some pieces of stuff are out of date, but I don't have time to replace it, so

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why I'd like to take

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opportunity to rebuild my house.Recently, I have upgraded equipment for my house and some workers will replace the old stuff with new stuff

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as the kitchen, and lounge.

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, it will make some noise to affect some neighbourhoods. I have known that situation for 5 days. On behalf of my family, I would like to say that sorry to you. I hope you're delighted when you have received my email. It's nearly ending in rebuilding my home. It will take us 2 days later, I will arrange a time for some workers to upgrade it to avoid affecting your life. I hope you understand my situation. If you have some questions regarding it, please feel free to reach out to me Thanks and regards Vỹ Nguye·

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

193 words

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: • explain the reason for the noise • apologies for the noise • describe what action you will take

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some cities, there are few controls over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, so people can build in whatever style they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In today's world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied.He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live.