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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: • explain the reason for the noise • apologies for the noise • describe what action you will take

#neighbours #noise #house #reason #apologies #action
Dear Mr Victor I hope you're doing well. First thing, I would like to apologise for
this
 inconvenience. Second thing, I would like to let you know about the noise from my apartments. I moved to a new house in 2022. Some pieces of stuff are out of date, but I don't have time to replace it, so
that is
 why I'd like to take
this
 opportunity to rebuild my house.Recently, I have upgraded equipment for my house and some workers will replace the old stuff with new stuff
such
 as the kitchen, and lounge.
Thus
, it will make some noise to affect some neighbourhoods. I have known that situation for 5 days. On behalf of my family, I would like to say that sorry to you. I hope you're delighted when you have received my email. It's nearly ending in rebuilding my home. It will take us 2 days later, I will arrange a time for some workers to upgrade it to avoid affecting your life. I hope you understand my situation. If you have some questions regarding it, please feel free to reach out to me Thanks and regards Vỹ Nguye·
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