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. In my opinion, AI

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want to destroy humans because they're just robots and

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. By the way, using AI for

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activities has both advantages and disadvantages. First of all, AI has hight accurate in work and

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than human. Currently,

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by AI for some jobs

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or product inspectors. In the

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, AI may able to do complex works. Some people lost their jobs because AI can do their tasks and save

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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The risk comes from artificial intelligence because AI wants to destroy humans.

Fully explain your ideas

Children today find it’s difficult to concentrate or pay attention in schools. Why do you think causes this problem? What do we need to do to solve this problem?

zoos should exist or not . discuss both views and give your opinion

The massive movement of people from agricultural areas to cities in search of employment can lead to serious problems in both places. What are the problems, and how can these be solved?

Many students choose to study at colleges and universities that are far away from the places where they grew up. Do the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks?

Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?