The risk comes from artificial intelligence because AI wants to destroy humans.

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want to destroy humans because they're just robots and

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The risk comes from artificial intelligence because AI wants to destroy humans.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training) Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

despite huge improvements in healthcare , the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now failing what could be the reason for this trend and what can be done to reserve it.

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Summarise the information about the process of making carbonated drinks by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.