Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to offer time for local environmental initiatives in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: Describe a local volunteer project that you are passionate about Explain what you would like to do to help Suggest how to gather more support for the cause Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows

Dear Sir,
This
is Dilpreet, a student of environmental studies at Okanagan college. I am writing to express my willingness to be a part of your team in regard to taking initiatives to benefit the environment. I had been thinking lately to organise a campaign to encourage people to use biodegradable materials which will be advantageous to society. Let me explain my point, first of all, I would try to raise awareness by defining how dangerous non-biodegradable products are, and how can we replace these with biodegradable ones as most of the community is deprived of
this
information. To illustrate, suggesting alternatives
such
as wood
instead
of plastic can lead to a reduction of using
such
products.
Additionally
, More support can be gathered by taking resort to media to spread the word to the entire nation as it would not be as effective,
however
, smaller steps can result in gaining massive success. So, why not start now? I hope you will consider my proposal and thank you in advance, Yours faithfully, Dilpreet
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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