The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart demonstrates what changes the five major cities experienced in average house
prices
in the period: 1990-1995 and 1996-2002, compared with the average home value of 1989.
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Overall
, it is clearly shown that between 1990 and 1995, housing Linking Words
prices
in most of these five cities were lower than in 1989, Use synonyms
while
in all cities there was an upward trend in average housing Linking Words
prices
between 1996 and 2002, with the exception of Use synonyms
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During the first 5 Use synonyms
years
, the average cost of houses in Tokyo and London looks the same with approximately minus 7%. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, New York accounted for 5% of a decrement compared to 1989. Linking Words
However
, in Madrid in Spain and in Linking Words
Frankfurt
in Germany house costs rose by roughly 2% and 3% respectively.
In the Use synonyms
last
5 Linking Words
years
(1996-2002) New York's average house price climbed by 5% which was greater than Madrid and Use synonyms
Frankfurt
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prices
. Madrid maintained the price growth and reached around 4% in Use synonyms
this
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while
Tokyo showed -5% which was a growth compared to the first 5 Linking Words
years
. Noticeably, Use synonyms
prices
of the houses in London increased dramatically by more than 10% which was the highest change in the decade. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
Frankfurt
residence costs reduced to 2% in the Use synonyms
last
5 Linking Words
years
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