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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is a view that physical
books
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newspapers
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 will be completely replaced by digital ones in the future as the latter enables
people
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 to read digital material free of charge. I would argue that
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 there has been an increase/rise in the number of e-readers purchased, some
people
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 printed
books
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 and
newspapers
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 over digital ones. I will give my reasons below.
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 reading a range of
books
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 and
newspapers
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 digitally without charge.
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 trend will likely be more common because in some technologically advanced countries, the majority of
people
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 have access
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to read
 free
newspapers
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 on the internet.
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, the popularity of physical
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 has dramatically dropped, which means newspaper companies will no longer print
newspapers
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 in the future.
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, they will most likely focus on their online presence.
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, there will still be some
people
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 who are willing to pay for physical
books
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 and
newspapers
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.
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 may be because they do not want to give up a sensory experience like holding a book in their hands or flipping through the pages, which electronic
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 cannot provide. To take myself as an example, I prefer to browse
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 in brick-and-mortar bookstores rather than scrolling through them on my electronic devices like my smartphone as I love the feel and smell of paper
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, I have been subscribing to the newspaper called Seoul Today for over 5 years
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 I can read articles on the website for free. The feeling of a newspaper is a huge pro,
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 reading articles on the screen seems to cause eye strain. In conclusion,
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 physical
newspapers
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 and
books
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 will not be purchased as readers will access them for free, I believe that there will still be some
people
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 who enjoy some of the benefits traditional
books
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 and
newspapers
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 offer.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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