Some people believe that children’s time outside of school should be filled with scheduled activities such as art and music classes and sports. Others feel that children need free time to play and relax. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Certain people acknowledge young mankind have

time

outside of school to engage in scheduled

activities

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as art, music classes and sports. ,

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some

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children

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spare

time

to play and relax. Involving kids in

activities

like art-based curriculum, music and physical recreation is one of the accustomed to our educational institution to view which part of

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interest they want at a young age. Learning the importance of masterpieces, music and

activities

is the solution to involve the school age to become more creative and resourceful.

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is the way out to improve their skills and interact with other people. At some point minor needs to have free

time

to play and rest. It's okay to have much

time

for themselves and to have a good

time

but it can result to do things that are not meant to do. For ,instance a huge amount of kids use electronics and witness the acts of most adults misusing social media.

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action turns the child distracts from their studies and not interested anymore in other leisure. In conclusion, give

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time

for the young to interact or see the essence of engaging in other

activities

and make the

time

enjoyable for being a child and rest.