Parents should be held legally responsible for their children's act. What is your opinion?
Some people consider
parents
solely responsible for their children
's actions. While
others argue and believe that the educational institutes as well as
the friend's circle of the children
can play a vital role
in its development.
In many ways, parents
put enormous efforts into the upbringing of their kids. The goal of every parent is to provide the best facilities to their offspring which may enhance their capabilities and make them responsible citizens.But in some cases
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,cases
children
ignore their parent's efforts and get involved in illicit activities which may lead to a situation that may result in terms of inevitable consequences. For example
, If children
get involved in illegal activities such
as drug addiction through their friend circle or if the child gets involved in burglary or flinching due to
any motivation we cannot blame them and put the responsibility on his parents
or their upbringing.
On the contrary
, if we started blaming parents
and considering them responsible for their children
's acts we will not be able to uplift our society
. Hence
our society
may not be able to nourish and cope with the modern-day challenges associated with kids. Thus
, necessary pragmatic measures are required which include social reforms and awareness campaigns are required to educate society
about the contemporary threats which may affect childhood development. For example
, Everyone in society
may keep an eye on scions to avoid kids' involvement in illicit activities. In addition
, special campaigns from the government should be launched to educate the masses about the modern challenges associated with children
.
In conclusion, the development of children
's role
in society
is as important as the role
of parents
and if children
lose their path then
we just cannot blame the parental role
but also
the role
of society
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