A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •tell your friend about your planned party •ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there •ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
#friend #restaurant #wonder #birthday #party #week #•tell #•ask #directions #food #recommendations #menu #addresses
Dear Pat,
It’s been a
while
since we spoke. How are you?
Just wanted to let you know that I've planned to have a party to celebrate my 30th birthday on 22 Satuarday
Correct your spelling
Saturday
this
month. I hope to invite all my friends including you so it will be a massive one. The cost for the event on my parents since we could have a grand celebration.
Tell me little a bit about the restaurant you visited a few weeks back to celebrate your brother’s birthday because I guess the hotel that has ample parking lots would be ideal for a large crowd. I just need the name of the place, address and directions to go there as I am not friendly with Google Maps and sometimes it would not give me the right way.
One more thing, If I’m not mistaken, you praised me that it had ample space and delicious menus that matched a party so it ‘d be grate
if you could send me the list of foods it offers and your preferences if any because all Correct your spelling
great
participants
are young and often look for tasty meals.
Speak soon
Lots of loveCorrect article usage
the participants
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task achievement
Make sure to correct the spelling of 'Saturday' and 'Google Maps'. Minor grammatical errors, such as 'I hope to invite all my friends including you,' could be rephrased for clarity, like 'I hope to invite all my friends, including you.'
coherence cohesion
Try to ensure that each paragraph deals with a single idea to improve readability and cohesion. For instance, you might separate the part where you ask for directions from where you ask about the menu recommendations.
task achievement
Your letter has a friendly and inviting tone, which is suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are well-executed, which adds to the overall structure of your letter.