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The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasing numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity?

#importance #biodiversity #numbers #species #threat
Growing numbers of
species
 under threat are the most crucial thing about
biodiversity
. A safe
environment
 and growing awareness of
people
 about
species
 are ways to maintain
biodiversity
. In my opinion, a safe climate is the best idea to keep
biodiversity
 on our earth. Earth has many environments like
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a forest
the forest
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forest
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forests
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,
sea
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seas
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,
river
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rivers
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, urban, etc. In the forest, society
need
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 to keep  plants from illegal logging and jungle fires,
furthermore
species
 have long ages in the park. In different areas of the sea, some
people
 catch fish with explosive material. it can break all of the
biodiversity
 in the sea. So,
public
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 should use
a safe ways
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a safe way
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 to catch fish in the ocean like fishing from a boat.
In addition
, society in the bank river in the urban area
also
 keeps their habitat by littering in the right place, because littering in the wrong place make flooding and broke the
environment
 of
biodiversity
 in the river.
People
 should keep all of the
environment
 of
biodiversity
 on the earth, so the number of
species
 under threat can increase significantly. The second way is growing awareness
of
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people
 to save
biodiversity
.
People
 should know knowledge and literature about
biodiversity
. Government should give education on
biodiversity
 in public
space
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spaces
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, schools, and universities.
Furthermore
,
people
 know important things about
biodiversity
.
Biodiversity
 in our world keeps
people
 from global warming and many disasters. So,
people
 care about their
environment
 by littering in the right place and caring for all of the
species
.
To conclude
, the best way to
maintaining
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maintain
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biodiversity
 is
save
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to save
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 the
environment
 and
grow
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growing
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 awareness among
people
 about
biodiversity
. So,
people
 can save
species
 under threat and their numbers increase significantly.
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