The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the procedure through which smoked
fish
are prepared.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the procedure can be divided into three main groups beginning with catching fish
to freeze, followed by preparing them to smoke, and lastly
smoking and storing them to sell.
In the beginning, fishermen provide fish
from the sea and carry them to the port by boat. This
is followed by, putting the fish
into a freezer, before thawing them in fresh water. Once this
step is complete, thawed fish
are cut using a knife, after which they are waited in salt water to make them yellow in colour. In the stage after
this
, the fish
are smoked through the use of a barbecue, following
this
, the smoked fish
are packed and for this
step, square-shaped boxes are used. After
this
, the packed smoked fish
are frozen at the temperature of 0 degrees and they are stored in a cold store. Over the course of the next step, the fish
are loaded in a truck to distribute to fish
shops and ultimately, they are ready to sell.Submitted by emineknc on
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