The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the procedure through which smoked
fish
are prepared.
Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the procedure can be divided into three main groups beginning with catching Linking Words
fish
to freeze, followed by preparing them to smoke, and Use synonyms
lastly
smoking and storing them to sell.
In the beginning, fishermen provide Linking Words
fish
from the sea and carry them to the port by boat. Use synonyms
This
is followed by, putting the Linking Words
fish
into a freezer, before thawing them in fresh water. Once Use synonyms
this
step is complete, thawed Linking Words
fish
are cut using a knife, after which they are waited in salt water to make them yellow in colour. In the stage Use synonyms
after
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this
, the Linking Words
fish
are smoked through the use of a barbecue, Use synonyms
following
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this
, the smoked Linking Words
fish
are packed and for Use synonyms
this
step, square-shaped boxes are used. Linking Words
After
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this
, the packed smoked Linking Words
fish
are frozen at the temperature of 0 degrees and they are stored in a cold store. Over the course of the next step, the Use synonyms
fish
are loaded in a truck to distribute to Use synonyms
fish
shops and ultimately, they are ready to sell.Use synonyms
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