The number of people who are overweight is constantly growing, and the only solution is to increase the prices on unhealthy food and drinks. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the number of overweight individuals has been increasing continuously. Enhancing the values of detrimental

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and beverages is the sole solution to ratify the situation. I mostly disagree with

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suggestion because there are many ways to overcome

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and spurring healthy and

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run their lives without necessary

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public. Lack of enough body practice leads to

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and health issues.

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should be encouraged to do some practice regularly by some programmes and regulations.

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public areas.

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could be encouraging for

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would become more active

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outside and they may avoid

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weight.

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often eat unhealthy

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and they consume them as redundant. These

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give negative effects on the circulation system and they are not

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individuals’ hunger.

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can be spurred to consume healthy

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with some mass education programmes.

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, television and radio channels can arrange informative programmes with the support of governments.

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classes could be opened in public facilities in order to teach the appropriate nutrition for

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, governments can remove some taxes from healthy groceries and products in terms of better reaching

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the public.

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’s nutrition habits may be changed and their tolerance can be reduced to gain kilos. In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with

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suggestion. Even though

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increasing the values of unhealthy food products may be efficient, I believe

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is not the only way to halt

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case and there are different ways to cease

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situation

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people

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and consume less

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healthy

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