Nowadays people get married and have kids in their thirties rather than when they are younger.Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
In the modern era, it is a common public opinion that
,
most Remove the comma
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of
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apply
the
people are engaged and start their Correct article usage
apply
life
on
their thirties, not Change preposition
in
in
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at
their
young age. I vehemently agree with the statement. Change the word
a
This
would be a
advantage for Change the article
an
the
society.
Nowadays, the decision to get married Correct article usage
apply
on
their Change preposition
in
30's
have a myriad of Change noun form
30s
benefites
to Correct your spelling
benefits
the
individuals, family and Correct article usage
apply
the
society as well. Correct article usage
apply
Firstly
, they are mature enough to take a decision and they can choose their partner according to
their choice. Secondly
, on
their 30's, most Change preposition
in
of
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apply
the
people are Correct article usage
apply
settlled
and they have Correct your spelling
settled
also
finanical
stability. Correct your spelling
financial
As a
result
they will get Add a comma
,result
good
alliance and both can live happily. Correct article usage
a good
For instance
, a report published by 'Times
of Correct article usage
The Times
india'
, in 2018 says that, Those who married in their Correct your spelling
India
India's
thrities
,Correct your spelling
thirties
enjoying
Wrong verb form
enjoy
the
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life
rather than a person
who married on
their Change preposition
in
20's
. They know how to manage a family better than Change noun form
20s
marriying
a Correct your spelling
marrying
carrying
person
in
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at
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a youngage
youngage
. As Correct your spelling
young age
a parents
and as Correct the article-noun agreement
parents
a parent
a
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apply
patner
, They are Correct your spelling
partner
sucessfull
human Correct your spelling
successful
beigns
.
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beings
begins
In addition
to this
, parenting is a difficult as well as
importent
thing in their Correct your spelling
important
life
. father and the mother are responsibile
for Correct your spelling
responsible
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the kids
kids
bad and good behaviours. Those who are over Change noun form
kids'
kid's
30's
, would have more knowledge and experience than Fix apostrophe usage
'30s
youngesters
. Correct your spelling
youngsters
Furthermore
, They can spent
enough time with their Change the verb form
spend
childrens
because they are already stable in terms of Correct your spelling
children
children's
professional
and Change the word
professionally
person
. Replace the word
personally
However
, people who are in 20's
, still struggling Fix apostrophe usage
'20s
for
stable their Change preposition
to
life
. Thus
, They don'nt
have time to Correct your spelling
don't
spent
with family and kids. Wrong verb form
spend
Subsequently
, the relation become
ends up. To cite an example, a survey conducted by local authorities say that, more divorce happened in the age group of 20-25.
Change the verb form
becomes
To conclude
, successful
family comes from Correct article usage
a successful
successfull
men or women. Correct your spelling
successful
Depend
on the Wrong verb form
Depending
person
's behaviour, the family runs happy
. I strongly recommend to Change the adjective
happily
upcoming
generation to settle Correct article usage
the upcoming
the
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apply
life
before marriage. That will give you a happy and enjoyable life
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