Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental
pollution
is a big problem
of
almost all countries nowadays, Some Change preposition
in
people
said that environmental problems, cannot be manage
by some individuals because Change the verb form
be managed
the
said only Correct your spelling
they
government
can definitely change that problem
. I argue with that statement,
because Remove the comma
apply
environmental
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the environmental
problem
should Fix the agreement mistake
problems
be manage
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be managed
with
the Change preposition
by
government
but also
in
the help of Change preposition
with
people
.
First of all, I understand that some Correct article usage
the people
people
said that only government
can solve environmental
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an environmental
problem
. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
For
example
Singapore Add a comma
,example
government
prohibited the use of diesel cars and equipement
in some of the very busy Correct your spelling
equipment
street
in Fix the agreement mistake
streets
SIngapore
cityCorrect your spelling
Singapore
,
because it can cause Remove the comma
apply
to
much Replace the word
too
pollution
and smoke belching coming form
diesel cars, the only allowed to enter Correct your spelling
from
during
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at
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the weekend
weekend
is the electric cars. Fix the agreement mistake
weekends
This
is a very good initiative to
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for
there
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their
government
because it can reaaly
reduce Correct your spelling
really
pollution
.
On the other hand
, government
should have the power and authority to control and manage environmental Add an article
the government
pollution
, but government
cannot do it alone...it should have the help of the Add an article
the government
people
. For example
, recycled product
or trash Fix the agreement mistake
products
it
should be put in Correct pronoun usage
apply
proper
place so that it cannot cause Add an article
the proper
a proper
pollution
, and people
should segregate the waste materials, like plastic and cans for proper disposal. In addition
, people
can help the government
to solve pollution
, if people
did not use there
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their
car
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cars
everyday
.
In conclusion,Replace the word
every day
government
and the people
should have a proper management plan to control to
much environmental Replace the word
too
pollution
to our mother earth. it should be total
team effort for the Add an article
a total
government
and the people
to solve environmental pollution
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite