The charts below give information about the electricity generation in two countries in 2009.

The charts below give information about the electricity generation in two countries in 2009.
The pie diagrams illustrate the percentage of electricity generation in
Germany
and
France
in 2009.
Overall
,All charts are split into
two
groups:"All types" and "Renewable".The
first
two
charts which are related to
Germany
show that it produced 560 billion kWh,
while
France
made 510 billion kWh.
On the other hand
,
it is clear that
the
First
two
diagrams have more gentle proportions,
while
the next
two
have total leaders.
Firstly
,
Germany
's "All Type" chart had a significant leader which has almost 60% of all amounts and it was the "Conventional Thermal"
section
.The other
two
parts("Renewables" and "Nuclear") had 17.4% and 23%.
However
,the second chart completely differed from the
first
one."Wind" and "Biomass" had close numbers(39.3% and 36.9%).
while
the other
two
had miserable per cent.
Moreover
,there was a
section
that had 0% and it was "Geothermal".
Secondly
,the
first
pie chart related to
France
differed from
Germany
's sharply.
While
Germany
's leader had 59.6%
France
's had a notable 76%.
However
, it caused a cut-off space for other sections.
Hence
, the other
two
("Renewable" and "Conventional Thermal") had 24% together.The total leader of the "All types"
section
in
Germany
had in
France
only 10.3%.Moving to the "Renewable"
section
in
France
it can be seen easily that the biggest score had "Hydroelectricity" which
also
had the highest per cent of all charts.
Due to
this
,other parts,like "Wind" with 10.5% and "Biomass" with 8.1% are almost unnotable.
Besides
, there were
also
"Solar" and "Geoth" with 0%
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