Nowadays, in some countries , it is allowed to have a gun at home. Do you agree with that? give your opinion

Nowadays, in some countries like the USA, having a gun at home is allowed,
this
fact causes citizens insecurity, since these can be obtained in stores that sell to anyone
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. I do not agree with
this
law at all, since, as has been demonstrated, the
use
of weapons against children and adolescents in schools
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has caused various deaths through no fault of the victims, since many times they are not even known, and not only
this
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but there are many adults who
use
them to shamelessly kill innocent people, sometimes even their own families. The free obtaining of
guns
means that many people who are not capable
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this
can buy one to take justice on their own, and these feel powerful. As we have seen in some news recently, the
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police themselves sometimes make
use
of these without a sense for reasons of racism, these being protected by the country's justice since they say that they
use
them in self-defence, when it has been shown that
this
is not the case because they shoot before asking. In my opinion, no one should have a weapon at home for the power that
this
offers to the owner, because is not a natural power,
also
he can
use
the weapon to do evil, and not protect himself as in
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those who agree to sell
guns
say it. If no human being could have the option of owning a weapon, no one would have to defend themselves, the
use
of violence should not be tolerated in any way, especially when the news shows us that many times they cause the deaths of innocents who cannot defend themselves. In conclusion, I’m in total disagreement with the
use
of
guns
, and they have to forbid them, because
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the
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people have to resolve
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the
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problems by talking and not with
guns
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