You have seen and advertisement from a couple who live in australia for some one to teach their two children your language for a year write a letter t the couple . in your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job . What else you could do for the family and give your reason for wanting the job

#advertisement #couple #australia #two #children #language #year #job #reason

dear ram

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letter is in regards to inform you that I am interested in teaching your children English language as I have seen

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about

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apply

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that you are looking for

tutor

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a tutor

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Firstly

I have done my

masters

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english

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English

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I have 5 years of teaching experience and these 2 things

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me a perfect fit for the job .

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teaching is my passion and

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really enjoy doing it . Apart from

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that

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can provide yoga classes to the kids , as

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certified

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yoga teacher . Physical education is

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studies .So during

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time

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we can practice yoga sessions which will

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keep

young ones physically and mentally fit . If I get

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job , I will be able to gain more experience which will add more value to my resume .

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will help me to get more new

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opportunities

oppertunities

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in future I am looking forward

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positive feedback from your side Yours sincerely Amrita

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