More and more serious crimes seem to be committed each year. Some think that the death penalty is the best way to deal with this problem while other people think different measures are more likely to be successful. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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Nowadays, serious crimes are committed every day around the world. Because
people
are thinking they can do whatever they want, but everyone needs to be judged.
For
this
reason, some
people
believe that the death penalty should be applied to solve
this
problem.
Nevertheless
, others consider that different measures are more likely to be victorious. In
this
essay, I am going to explain why I agree with the first statement.
To begin
with, most
people
who are guilty of important crimes must not be able to start again. But first, they are going to court for their trial, where the judge can decide what will be the level of the sentence, death penalty or jail forever.
For example
,
last
year in my country a man ripped a young girl, it was the
second
time in his life that he was recognized as guilty. If
at
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the first time, the judge decided to send him to death
this
will never happen again.
For
this
reason, the rippers should not have a
second
chance.
In contrast
, everyone needs to get a
second
chance, but they must be punished to not start again. Obviously,
this
depends on the seriousness of the case.
For instance
, a French trader who was working for one of the biggest banks in the country stole one billion euros and went abroad. Justice caught him in Venezuela and he was sent to jail for thirty years and had to give back all the money.
As a result
, they can fix their mistakes.
To sum up
, all cases are different, and sentences should be adapted at each time. Rippers cannot get a
second
chance,
however
, thieves should be punished. I consider that
people
who are guilty of serious crimes should have capital punishment.
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