In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

In recent years , population growth is an urgent issue in many countries .
However
, some people still want to choose to live alone
instead
of living in large family groups. In my opinion , I think it has already benefits for areas in every country . I will clarify reasons to support my idea . On the one hand , during modern life , young generations always think about a comfortable lifestyle so being alone is a great idea for all . With the same view as
them
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, alone or
small
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units will be easier to control or discuss than a family with a large number of members .
For example
, when one person has any decision ,
instead
of deciding on their own, the person must consult with each family member and
then
make the decision on their own, which is very
time consuming
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and
also
difficult to agree with your opinion at first. More than that , the percentage of small units in the economy is increasing when individuals can earn money in different ways and not depend on someone in their home . The government encourages citizens to develop their skills ,
talents
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in their own methods .
Thus
, a dynamic economy will promote better culture and other areas.
On the other hand
, it will be a negative trend when people take advantage of bad habits .
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will be the common reason for parents . And the result will destroy the trust that parents have in their children in some ways .
For instance
, the rate of crime is a crucial problem nowadays , lack of knowledge or awareness when they live alone
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them fall down and lose control . In conclusion, I believe that living alone or in a small unit will be a great trend for everyone in the world as long as they have
concern
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from the government or all communities to prevent negative and positive effects on citizens .
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