Some people think that government should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that artists should be helped by alternative sources such as people, NGOs and Universitirs. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Some habitats represent that the ministry should provide financial
support
to excellent
artists
like painters and musicians.
While
, some other groups of humans,
NGOs
and
Universities
should provide financial
support
to an artist. I believe that both will be considered equally pay to them.
This
is discussed
further
in the essay. On
one
hand, a group of creative
artists
like painters and musicians will often get
government
financial
support
when the ministry is organizing any
event
which is related to celebrating a national day or national
event
at that time the
artists
will become in pictures and they will get a
contract
for the same.
However
, governments are doing
this
type of activity very rarely which is
also
not defined for any particular location
also
. So, rather to hire any artist governments will give a new
one
for each activity. The reason is that the ministry is
also
having other responsibilities like growing up the country, to do better improvements in each field like education, healthcare and transportation and so on.
this
is hard for the
government
to provide financial
support
to
artists
.
on the other hand
, some individuals,
NGOs
and
universities
are
also
able to provide a
contract
to
artists
.
Although
it is
also
having boundaries for each
one
which
is
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about
contract
amount, timing and places each will be concerning points for both ends.
For example
, if someone hires a musician for a private
event
then
it could be more cost-effective for that particular person, so they might be concerned about the price and facilities which they need to provide
artists
on the day of the
event
.
Then
about the
NGOs
, These
NGOs
also
have the responsibility for providing help to the backward areas where the people are struggling with Food, clothes and other minimal things to live,
NGOs
will focus and invest their time and money in that particular areas.
While
,
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there are other
NGOs
available that can hire the artist and able to pay them for small and big activities.
However
, the
Universities
are organizing events and activities where they will prefer to provide a
contract
to the musician. Until and unless the
universities
are efforting the cost for the first time
then
it might be
also
a concern for money
artists
. In conclusion, I firmly believe that creative
artists
like painters and musicians need to provide financial
support
from
Government
, Semi
Government
like
NGOs
,
Universities
and Some groups of people who are capable to provide. It's not any
one
responsibility to give
support
to
artists
.
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