Some people say that distance learning is a quick and effective way to study. Others, however, disagree and say that distance learning programs can never be as good as courses taken in person. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

The pandemic has thought us to adapt to difficult situations and changed the way we live and
study
. Distance-learning
program
is one of the products of the pandemic situation, it’s a common thing for us nowadays. The
study
material is posted through the internet, and we can join the learning process from afar, with no need to go to the classroom in person. I strongly agree that distance learning
program
is a brilliant finding to the education system.
Firstly
, the
program
is creating an opportunity for everyone to
study
, no matter where they lived. The
student
or expecting
student
does not need to be in the same country or region as the institution,
such
as a college or university. They can follow the learning process from wherever they are without worrying to be left out or missing the studying process.
For example
, my friend is in Indonesia, and he is currently taking a Master's
study
in Australia, all of his classes are online and he can follow the Master's
program
from his home in Indonesia. The
study
materials are posted on google classroom and the
study
report is submitted online via email or Google Drive.
Secondly
, the
program
is encouraged
cost
-effectiveness, either for the institution or the students. It helps the institution to reduce the learning
cost
.
For example
, the billing
cost
of electricity and water is declining, because their
student
and lecturer are not applied present in person in the classroom. For the students, the transportation and/or rent
cost
is declining. They don’t need to go to their college to follow the lecturing session and
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the foreign
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they don’t have to spend on apartment or dorm rent
cost
. In conclusion, the
program
is beneficial for the learner and the institutions. It promotes flexibility and
cost
-effectiveness.
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