A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in computer age has more advantages than disadvantages? Describe the positive and negative impacts of technology on our lives and give your opinion in 250 words.

The development of

technologies

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technology

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have

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improved and changed our lives. It helps us in many ways, but some

people

completely depend on the

technologies

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technology

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. I think it is natural when

people

are facing big innovative things, but there are not only advantages

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but

also

disadvantages. First of all, the development of technology brings us a lot of benefits. The significant one is

the

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function as a communication tool. We can communicate with many

people

you

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know and

people

you

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don't know whenever. It changed our social activities. One of them,

the

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working style. We

use

computers and share our work using the

internet

. It means we can share it in any place. We can say it is

the

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revolutional

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of

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working.

However

, there are

also

disadvantages. Focusing on the

internet

, Some children don't have literacy on the

internet

and sometimes it causes huge problems.

For example

, in Japan, there is a problem with kids doing immoral things and posting them because they want to stand out on the

internet

.

Also

, the anomaly is

also

a problem of the

internet

. The specific feature of the

internet

used to be a positive point because there was no place to post

people

's own views without

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real name. I think it is very valuable as a place for healthy discussions regardless of position, but now they

use

anonymity to post their hate. It is a harmful effect of the fact that the

Internet

has spread and has become

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commonplace in our lives, and it is a problem that should be solved. In summary, technology gives us a lot of advantages and makes our lives more comfortable, but there are

also

disadvantages. I believe that we have to

use

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technology with the demerit to

use

and literacy in

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mind.