The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The chart illustrates the destination of Anthropology graduates after completing their bachelor's degree course from one university. The table displays the monthly income of anthropologists with five years of working experience.
have a salary of more than $100,000 and work as freelance consultants at 40% and in the government sector at 50% ,
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, after 5 years of work, the large volume of anthropologists that do their job as freelance consultants and government part have an average income of more than $100,000 except those Linking Words
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perform in private companies have the highest probability to gain a salary of around $50,000-74,999.
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postgrad study is the least part and accounted for just only 5%.
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those who do in private companies with $50,000-74,999 income are the greatest portion and accounted for 35%.Add a comma
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