The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
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The chart illustrates the destination of Anthropology graduates after completing their bachelor's degree course from one university. The table displays the monthly income of anthropologists with five years of working experience.
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, Most fresh Anthropology graduates do full-time
career
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for living.
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, after 5 years of work, the large volume of anthropologists that do their job as freelance consultants and government part have an average income of more than $100,000 except those
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perform in private companies have the highest probability to gain a salary of around $50,000-74,999.
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the chart, a full-time job is the biggest sector and makes up for 52% that those who finished an anthropology degree course did follow by
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job at 15% and unemploy 12%.
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, graduates have chosen to do part-time work
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postgrad study is the least part and accounted for just only 5%. Regarding the table, the highest proportion of anthropologists with 5 years experienced
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have a salary of more than $100,000 and work as freelance consultants at 40% and in the government sector at 50% ,
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those who do in private companies with $50,000-74,999 income are the greatest portion and accounted for 35%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree
  • part-time work
  • full-time work
  • postgraduate study
  • unemployment
  • career trends
  • employment opportunities
  • flexibility
  • specialization
  • competitive job market
  • salary
  • earning potential
  • private sector
  • government sector
  • freelance work
  • public policy
  • cultural preservation
  • consulting
  • corporate anthropology
  • expertise
  • accrued
  • distribution
  • sector
  • trend
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