Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
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children
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However
, I believe that Linking Words
this
phenomenon can be caused by a reason which can lead to detrimental effects.
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Parents
do have not enough Use synonyms
time
to control their Use synonyms
children
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parents
are busy with their work, they cannot intensively monitor their child activities. Use synonyms
This
can exacerbate the situation if both father and mother are workers. Even though Linking Words
children
, in terms of using Use synonyms
smartphones
, have been given strict rules by their Use synonyms
parents
, they can easily break the rules because they know that their Use synonyms
parents
will not pay attention to them. Use synonyms
For example
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children
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smartphones
with unlimited Use synonyms
time
from morning to afternoon, when their Use synonyms
parents
are working. Use synonyms
As a result
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children
will become reliant on Use synonyms
smartphones
for their daily lives.
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circumstance happens constantly, it will lead to negative developments for offspring. Linking Words
Firstly
, they are vulnerable to suffering from eye problems. Smartphone screen produces much radiation that probably makes Linking Words
children
lose their vision. Use synonyms
Secondly
, their academic performance is about to decrease. When Linking Words
children
become addicted to using Use synonyms
smartphones
, they will lazy to study more about courses in school. Use synonyms
For instance
, rather than using Linking Words
smartphones
to search for informative material, they make Use synonyms
time
to play online games. As consequence, Use synonyms
children
will get many problems with both education and health problem ,especially blindness.
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To sum up
, I believed that the reason Linking Words
children
be too addicted to Use synonyms
smartphones
is a lack of monitoring from Use synonyms
parents
which can lead to getting negative effects on both health and education.Use synonyms
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