Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is argued that some

children

spend most of their

time

using

smartphones

.

However

, I believe that

this

phenomenon can be caused by a reason which can lead to detrimental effects.

Parents

do have not enough

time

to control their

children

. When

parents

are busy with their work, they cannot intensively monitor their child activities.

This

can exacerbate the situation if both father and mother are workers. Even though

children

, in terms of using

smartphones

, have been given strict rules by their

parents

, they can easily break the rules because they know that their

parents

will not pay attention to them.

For example

,

children

can access

smartphones

with unlimited

time

from morning to afternoon, when their

parents

are working.

As a result

,

children

will become reliant on

smartphones

for their daily lives. If

this

circumstance happens constantly, it will lead to negative developments for offspring.

Firstly

, they are vulnerable to suffering from eye problems. Smartphone screen produces much radiation that probably makes

children

lose their vision.

Secondly

, their academic performance is about to decrease. When

children

become addicted to using

smartphones

, they will lazy to study more about courses in school.

For instance

, rather than using

smartphones

to search for informative material, they make

time

to play online games. As consequence,

children

will get many problems with both education and health problem ,especially blindness.

To sum up

, I believed that the reason

children

be too addicted to

smartphones

is a lack of monitoring from

parents

which can lead to getting negative effects on both health and education.