The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Given is the graph comparing the ways of utilization of noxious garbage in the Republic of
Korea
, Sweden
and the UK.In general, there are five methods of this
process.
As data suggests, in Korea
and Sweden
waste
is utilized by recycling, incineration and by digging it in. Looking into details, approximately half of garbage in Sweden
is buried underground,while
in the Korean Republic - only a quarter of it. However
, Korea
is a leader in recycling(69%), whereas
only fourth part of overall
deleterious waste
in Sweden
is reprocessed. The least popular in these two countries is destroying waste
by fire: only 9 % In Korea
and one-fifth share in Sweden
.
Turning to Great Britain, the majority of its harmful waste
is utilized in landfills(82 %),whereas
only 2 % are incinerated. It is worth noting that The United Kingdom is also
using two additional methods: dumping in the sea and chemical treatment ( 8% and 8 % respectively).
Overall
, there were five utilization methods mentioned, amongst which recycling was the most developed in Korea
, whereas
in Sweden
and Great Britain the majority of poisonous waste
is buried underground.Submitted by annaosmatesko on
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