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The chart below describes the production of wheat by 5 countries in 2012 and 2020. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below describes the production of wheat by 5 countries in 2012 and 2020. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of
wheat
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 measured in
million
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 metric
tonnes
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, produced in 5 nations in the
years
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 2012 and 2020.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the highest quantity of
wheat
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 was produced in the USA and the least in Spain in both
years
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.
To begin
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 with, the USA produced by far the largest quantity of
wheat
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 in both
years
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 at 50 and about 65
million
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 metric
tonnes
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 in 2012 and 2020 respectively.
In contrast
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, the least amount of
wheat
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 was grown in Spain at nearly 5MMT in 2012 and approximately 10MMT in 2020. In Pakistan,
wheat
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 was grown at a relatively similar rate of about 25
million
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 metric
tonnes
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 in both
years
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.
In addition
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, at about 30MMT, Australia cultivated the second-largest amount of
wheat
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 in 2012,
however
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,
this
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 number fell significantly to nearly 15
million
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 metric
tonnes
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 in 2020. Meanwhile, Canada saw a dramatic increase in
wheat
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 production from just a little above 25 in 2012 to approximately 35
million
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 metric
tonnes
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 in 2020
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, million, tonnes, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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