the diagram shows the metamorphosis of a frog

the diagram shows the metamorphosis of a frog
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the diagram shows the metamorphosis of a frog
This
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picture depicts the cycle of the metamorphosis of a
frog
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.
Overall
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, it comprises five stages that start from egg mass and end with an adult
frog
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,
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and
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all of which can be divided into two phases. To start with, the first process is when a female
frog
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lays
his
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its
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egg mass having a white layer and a black dot in the middle of the egg. After a few days, the eggs transform into the tadpole where there is a head and a tail with black colour. In the following stage, hind legs appear in the tadpole which is followed by stages to
become
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a young
frog
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. The phase of becoming a young
frog
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begins with the appearance of different anatomy and size
such
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that the body becomes larger
as well as
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the tail becomes smaller. In a young
frog
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, the eyes are
also
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clearer and the black colour turns into
the
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green. The stage ends when the young
frog
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becomes
adults
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adult
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with complete features without a tail, and there are not only hind legs but
also
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front legs.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words frog with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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