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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?

#criminals #crimes #prison #effects #society
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the
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modern
society
,
crime
racing
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 up day by day. Studies
shows
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 many prisoners retake crimes even after they
out
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 of Jail. I’m going to discuss the cause and effects relating to
this
 matter.
According to
 me,
people
are tend
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 to be more aggressive each and every day. Some of them ended up showing their anger by involving
to
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 a fight or else by doing a
crime
. Most
of
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the
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people
 became
criminals
 because
of
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they try to take revenge
from
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on
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the
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others.
For
instance
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 there was a famous guy who killed seven
people
 as
a
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revenge
of
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 his sister’s rape.
Secondly
, drugs and lack of money became very common in
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modern
society
.
Young
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 generation
are
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 more
addict
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 to
the
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drugs
now a days
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nowadays
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.
This
 cause to gain robbery and
crime
.
This
 became a huge impact
to
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association
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the association
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. Showing possible effects
in
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this
 major problem
are
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 the
society
 and government ministry. The government can spend more money by introducing many programs which can prison bring up their level of
economy
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the economy
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as well as
 their skill. The
criminals
 will not
be involve
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be involved
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 in
further
 crimes.
Nevertheless
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 government should build rehabilitation
centers
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centres
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 for
the
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criminals
,
therefore
 they will learn how to deal with
community
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the community
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 and how to earn by hardworking.
Finally
,
the
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society
 and education
is
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 the next effects
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brings
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criminals
 to
crime
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a crime
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 back.
Society
 should treat each and every person as
similarities
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 prisons shouldn’t marginalize at any cost. In
conclusion
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 the given reasons rise up
people
 for being
misdeed
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 and neglect.
Therefor
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 by providing proper guldens they can be rescued
for
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from
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 being
a murders
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murders
a murder
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 once again.
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