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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing house work in households in one country betweeb 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing house work in households in one country betweeb 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line charts illustrate how much the possession of electrical appliances changed and the number of
hours
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 people in a country spent doing chores in 100 years from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
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, more and more families were equipped with electrical facilities during the mentioned period.
In contrast
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, the number of
hours
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 of housework witnessed a dramatic downtrend. In terms of electrical objects existing in every house,
while
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 nobody had a fridge in his house in 1920, from 1980 to 2019, 100% of all households owned
this
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 type of product. The figure for owning vacuum cleaners
also
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 increased from 30% to 100% from the beginning to the end of the period. After 100 years, the data on the ownership of washing machines went through a general increase despite some minor fluctuations in between, from 40% to just over 70% in the mentioned time. In the second chart, the time citizens in
this
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 country spent doing errands in their houses continuously dropped off from 50
hours
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 per week in 1920 to only 10
hours
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 in 2019.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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