Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Globalisation has reduced the barriers to
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around the world and
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skills and knowledge. It is argued that professionals should limit their practice
in
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the
country
where they completed their training;
however
, working anywhere
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own will is
also
advocated. The essay will articulate that man is born free and should
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personal benefit, as I believe that there should not be any restriction of location for
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skilful
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. The
country
provides the financial resources and field expertise for developing the skills of the professionals;
hence
it is believed that
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is required to
work
for them in order to compensate
the
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given opportunity.
For instance
, the doctors gain
work
experience in public hospitals which run
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the
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government assistance and funding.
Moreover
, it is likely that the expertise in the field will be more fruitful in the same market where
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worked previously. Engineering projects are a perfect epitome of
this
as the environmental and other factors will be the same.
On the other hand
, the globalisation favors free movement of resources including human capital. If people chose to
work
in a better setting beyond the borders of the
country
, certainly the advantages of working there outweighed the disadvantages.
This
in turn creates
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competition and
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for a better and quality working environment for workers to attract and retain them.
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plausible
argument
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in
favor
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of working in
home
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country
, I believe that there should not be any limitations to
work
rather
professional
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professionals
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should
work
after evaluating their personal and professional growth opportunities.
This
will create a world to be
more
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competitive and peaceful place to live in.
To sum up
, working environment and benefits should drive a professional to decide the workplace not their location
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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