The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.
The line charts show information on five different jam fruits namely, strawberry, raspberry, grape, cherry and plum from 2009 to 2014. A period of five years.
Overall
, the first thing that can be clearly seen that strawberry was the highest product sold and it was greatly increased over five years. Linking Words
In contrast
, the plum was the smallest product sold and it declined every year.
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In addition
, strawberry jam increased from 3 per Linking Words
cent
to 7 per Use synonyms
cent
which means went up from 4 per Use synonyms
cent
from 2009 to 2014. Followed by raspberry and grape at 4.5 and 5.5 per Use synonyms
cent
in 2019.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, plums went down every year in 2009 the percentage sold at 2.5 per Linking Words
cent
and declined to 2014 at zero per Use synonyms
cent
similar to Use synonyms
cherry
which declined every year.Fix the agreement mistake
cherries
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