The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.

The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.
The line charts show information on five different jam fruits namely, strawberry, raspberry, grape, cherry and plum from 2009 to 2014. A period of five years.
Overall
, the first thing that can be clearly seen that strawberry was the highest product sold and it was greatly increased over five years.
In contrast
, the plum was the smallest product sold and it declined every year.
In addition
, strawberry jam increased from 3 per
cent
to 7 per
cent
which means went up from 4 per
cent
from 2009 to 2014. Followed by raspberry and grape at 4.5 and 5.5 per
cent
in 2019.
On the other hand
, plums went down every year in 2009 the percentage sold at 2.5 per
cent
and declined to 2014 at zero per
cent
similar to
cherry
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cherries
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which declined every year.
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