It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.

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a new
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in the same place is a bad idea.
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different to finding
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not a good idea.
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a new high
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is a good opportunity for the community.To illustrate, that makes for
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a new high
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we can open
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for the
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the belief that a good idea for all
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helps
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to make a new business around the
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can make a city
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good for
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city. In conclusion, after analysis of both
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of view,I believe
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good for all
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living in
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region and
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a new high
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are
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big
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when we have
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do
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who do
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not like that.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational opportunities
  • extracurricular activities
  • community hub
  • stimulate the local economy
  • property values
  • quality of life
  • resource allocation
  • construction and operation
  • economic benefits
  • community development
  • traffic and congestion
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