The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity
The diagram illustrates the process of electricity manufacturing from geothermal energy. Looking from an
overall
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entirely man-made process has five major stages, starting with pumping cold Linking Words
water
down underground and ending up with electricity production by a generator.
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Initially
, cold Linking Words
water
is stored in a container and Use synonyms
then
pumped down through an injection well, which is 4.5km depth. Linking Words
Subsequently
, cold Linking Words
water
flows through the underground hot rocks in the geothermal zone, to be heated and is transformed into hot Use synonyms
water
. Afterwards, hot Use synonyms
water
is pumped up through the production well into a condenser, where it is condensed into steam.
The steam produced from the condenser goes through a pipe to rotate the turbine, which is connected to a generator by an axle, and eventually the generator covert the rotation energy to electricity to distribute to the tower.Use synonyms
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